As I belong to English background, so I try to write in English. Please give your comments as it is my first attempt. it is a poem,

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Double Eyes
His eyes are magnificent,
My repressed feelings burst out
though it is not purified acceptance.
These feelings not come often
I’ve got lots of love what feelings
Works for;
I’ve never felt that before-
His is not marvelous handsome, though.
This semester begins with this intoxication
As his eyes are blooming;
Sure wipe out by the end-
My rambling soul dwelling in
Inconsistency; does it belong to double eyes?

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